范文:Hobbies 2
「要求」
每个人都有自己的爱好，有些人喜欢集邮，有些人喜欢跳舞，这些个人爱好为我们的生活增添了不少色彩。请以“Hobbies”为题写一篇短文，并结合你自己的经历谈谈你对“Hobbies”的看法。
「范文」
Hobbies
Almost everyone has a hobby. A hobby can provide us with interest， enjoyment， friendship， knowledge and relaxation. It can be something from which we learn more about ourselves and the world， It helps both manual and mental workers relax after periods of hard work. It also helps improve a person's mental and physical health.
Different people have different hobbies. Some paint pictures， sing pop songs， perform on musical instruments and enjoy collecting coins or stamps； others raise flowers， go fishing， hunt animals or spend their time on sports. Anyone， rich or poor， old or young， sick or healthy， can follow a satisfying hobby.
As for me， I like sports very much. Sometimes I play tennis or badminton or go swimming. Sometimes I exercise alone and go running regularly in the morning. whichever I choose， if I exercise regularly，I will be sure to improve my health.
「评语」
该文能紧扣题意，语言很流畅。开头先介绍个人爱好的益处，然后从总的角度出发，介绍个人不同的兴趣爱好，最后再过渡到自己。之中运用的一些习惯短语也很恰当，如“provide sb. with sth.”。“learn about ”。“perform on”等等。
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