范文:Advice of solving housing problem
「要求」
随着越来越多的外来人口涌入城市，城市的住房总是变得越来越紧迫。许多人提出了不同的解决办法。你对此有什么建议吗？请你写一篇短文谈一谈你对解决城市住房问题的建议。
「范文」
With the development of modern industry， more and more people are flowing into big cities. Accordingly， the housing problem in big cities is becoming more and more serious.
People have offered many solutions to this problem. I think building satellite cities in the suburbs is more practical. The fresh air and beautiful scenery in the suburbs will be appealing to the city citizens， who suffer from air pollution， noises， etc. In the overcrowded city， with more people leaving the city， more space will be available for those remaining. The housing problem in big cities will thus be solved.
In the meantime， I'm against the idea of utilizing the underground space to solve the problem. We can imagine how uncomfortable it will be to live under the ground ， having to probe in the dark . The air there will be very stuffy， and the cost of building underground houses will be tremendous.
In brief， building satellite cities can not only improve the living condition in big cities ， but also provide a much better living environment. But the housing problem is very complicated. Perhaps people can hardly rely on only one way to solve the problem completely.
「评语」
该文首段以一句话概括了目前的问题。而后作者在第二段提出了建造卫星城的解决办法，并阐述这样做的好处。第三段作者提出了反对向地下发展住房这一解决办法，并解释了原因。末段，作者指出虽然建造卫星城有诸多好处，但住房问题非常复杂，不能依赖单一方法来解决。全文思路清晰，结构分明，段落之间过渡自然。用词准确清楚。
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