范文:The advantages of private tutoring
「要求」
高校大学生最大的勤工俭学来源是家教，很多中小学生都有家教。这是为什么呢？这又说明什么呢？请写出你的看法。
「范文」
The advantages of private tutoring
A recent study shows that about 80% of pupils have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents， for various reasons， missed the chance to obtain a good education. so when their children have difficulty with their school work， they are helpless.
Private tutoring is a good solution. As private tutoring is usually one-on-one， the teacher knows the strengths as well as the weaknesses of the pupil， and teaching is， in most cases， directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils.
「评语」
看了事实然后进行分析，试图从逻辑上推出前因后果，而这些又都需要事实来证明。这个命题是开放性的，大家完全可以各抒已见。本文清晰严谨地表达了自己的看法；缺点是只看到有益的一面，略显单薄。
When teaching a lesson， the teacher reads his student continuously， and change the subject if he is losing the audience.
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