范文:Private Schools
「要求」
现在越来越多的民办私立学校在中国崭露头角，结束了政府办学这一单一的教育体制。请你写一篇文章以私立学校为题展开论述。提纲如下：
越来越多的私立学校在中国建立起来，尽管发展尚不完善，并且学费昂贵，但前景看好。
私立学校受到欢迎有其原因。
但足够的钱并不能保证良好的教育……
「范文」
Private Schools
More and more private schools are being set up in China these days， ending the state monopoly of the country's educational system. Although private schools are still on the experimental stage and are much more expensive as compared with public schools， there is no lack of application for enrollment.
People welcome private schools for good reasons. First of all， those schools are relieving our government of part of the burdens of financing so many schools. Secondly， parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if they costs more. And having more money than the government-funded public schools， those private schools can attract better teachers. They can also offer better environments including superior living facilities and more advanced teaching equipment.
However， adequate money doesn't guarantee good education. If not well guided and properly disciplined， the privileged young children might turn out to be new aristocrats， and therefore unfit for our highly competitive modern society.
「评语」
该文思路清晰，行文紧凑，特别是一系列复合句的使用，加强了文章的连贯性；表达简练而清楚，用词准确。
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