范文:Health
「要求」
健康是革命的本钱，请以“health”为题目写篇100单词的英语小短文。每段的中心句已经给出：
Health is the foundation of one's future success.
What should we do to maintain and enhance our health？
Health is more important than wealth.
「范文」
Health
It is clear that health is the foundation of one's future success. If you become sick， it is nearly impossible to pursue your career effectively. On the other hand， if you are strong， you can go all out to overcome the obstacles that lie ahead of you.
Now that we know that health is the source of our energy， what should we do to maintain and enhance our health？ First， we should exercise every day to strengthen our muscles. Second， we should keep regular hours of our lives. If we get up early， we can breathe fresh air and see the sunrise， and this habit can do wonders for our outlook on life. Third， there is a proverb that says， “Prevention is better than cure.”
In conclusion， health is more important than wealth. Those who are rich but lose their health are no more fortunate than those who are poor. If you want your wish to come true， health is the most important ingredient of your success.
「评语」
该文为行云流水，结构清楚而紧凑。开篇说明健康的重要性。在第二段里，分了三个层次来阐释“健康是我们能量的源泉”，而且还有提问句来引导下面的回答。最后一段，“in conclusion”，总结了全文，而且有所提高。
Understand your health benefits and keep track of them.
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