名师指导：2014考研英语大作文三段写作方略三
名人代言的非模板式表达:
第二段
Obviously, the message the picture tries to convey is that celebrity endorsement could bring about potential
problems despite its many advantages. That is, without regulations, it could be used by those with bad intentions to
trick people into buying commodities that are either poor in quality or harmful to people's health.
第三段
With celebrity endorsement increasingly used by companies and manufactures in our society to promote their
products, we, as customers, should always keep a clear mind and make sensible decisions. Meanwhile, it is also
our government's responsibility to make laws and regulations for celebrity endorsement to ensure the rights of
customers and create a safe and sound environment for the development of advertising business.
“个人能力和品质”的写作步骤
某种品质对成功很重要:
可能出现的主题词:
1.顺境与逆境(Favorable Circumstances and adverse Circumstances)
2.勤奋(hard working, diligence, painstaking efforts
3.谨慎(prudence and determination
4.坚持/毅力(perseverance persistence, determination)
5.热情和乐观(enthusiasm and optimism)
6.博学和求知(learnedness and seeking knowledge/pursuit of knowledge)
7.活力(vitality
8.身强体壮，充满活力(bursting with vitality and good health
9.独立(independence)
10.感恩(gratitude ,gratification)
11.创新(creation, innovation, critical mind, critical thinking )
12.鼓励(encouragement)
13.真诚(sincerity )
14.宽容(humanity, love, understanding and tolerance)
15.白满和谦逊( Being self-satisfied and being modest)
16.勇敢(courage and bravery
17.敬业精神(professional dedication and professional ethics)
18.业务水平(competence
19.苦难(suffering and hardship)
第二段的写作:
…第一句:…
The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with creation or innovation when it comes to the cultivation
of individual characteristics./ for the personal growth.
或者:
The author of the picture attempts to convey with a certain amount of confirmation the distinctly clear
message that the spirit of creation seems to underlie almost all human successes.
或者
This human quality is part and parcel to the personal growth and its absence will definitely lead to one's poor
performance and lower achievement.
…第二句:…
Put it another way, without it, one could hardly/barely taste victory/ achieve their goal.
或者:
Put it another way, the adventure spirit is a key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for
individuals or for a nation.
或者:
To be sure, without the courage to engage in unknown journey and to embrace unexpected detours or
setbacks, we would have no any advance to speak of.
Fairly speaking, people or organization being able to do the next big thing must have this urge to take on the
unfamiliar or unexpected route. And, adventure spirit, which this picture highlighted, indeed constitutes one of
the wheels on which human society evolves.
…第三句:…
Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society.
或者
On my personal level, independence is truly the fundamental attribute of top performers, which separate the
high achievers from the rest of the pack.
或者:
In our era, also, this quality makes some outstanding companies or people stand out.
…第四句…
People with spirit of independence can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into
society, and even attain social status.
或者举例:
谷歌，著名的互联网公司，依靠其不可匹敌的产品获得了一系列杰出的成就。正是冒险精神使这个公
司为其股东和公众创造了巨大的价值。换句话讲:如果没有创造精神，谷歌是不可能获得这些杰出的成就。
曼德拉的例子
版本一
曼德拉，一位巨人和伟大的英雄，由于坚信人生而平等，被残酷的关押了27年，最终把白己的祖国改
造成了一个开放的社会，可以说是世界上最有说服力的关于坚强意志的例了，他用他一生的经历告诉我们:
无论什么时候，无论在哪里，无论如何，面对挫折时的坚毅和面对梦想的执着都是通向成功的重要原则
版本二
Nelson Mandela, one of the most recognizable African names in history, was a man possessing unmatched
capability to endure and to forbear. He insisted on love and forgiveness despite of having been put behind bars for
27 years for his unwavering belief in human equality.
His life perfectly illustrates the importance of fortitude and perseverance in achieving goals and dreams.
曼德拉，历史上被人记住的最有名的非洲名字，拥有无可匹敌的忍耐能力。尽管由于坚信人生而平等
而被关押了27年，却坚信爱和宽容。他的生命完美的证明了坚毅和执着在实现目标和梦想中的重要性。
马云的例子
版本一:
13. The success story of Ma Yun, founder of China's online trading empire--Alibaba, best
illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal ambition and creating value for the
society
马云，中国电了商务帝国阿里巴巴的创始人，阿里巴巴的年销售额已经达到白亿，他的成功故事完美
的例证了在实现个人理想和为社会创造价值时，创新的重要性。
版本二:
14. Ma Yun } the creator of Taobao, who makes the most profitable day for e-commerce in the
world一Singles' Day, best illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal
ambition and creating value for a nation.
马云，淘宝网这种全新的B2C商业模式的创新者，开创了全球互联网利润最高的网络购物节:双十一，
他完美地例证了在实现个人理想和为社会创造价值时，创新的重要性。
His incredible achievements originating from the critical thinking even
political heads both domestic and abroad: Li Keqiang, the Chinese premier,attracts attention
was reported to conversation with him and more company in UK. recently, British Prime Minister Cameron tried to convince and curiosity of have held close him to list his company in UK.
他那些源白于创新思维的成就甚至引起了海内外政治领袖的好奇和关注。据报道中国总理李克强都和他有亲密的交谈。最近，甚至英国首相都尝试着说服他到英国开公司。
…最后一句…
In other words, were there no the spirit of ihdepehdehce, we would never taste the real happiness of the
successful life.
换句话讲，要是没有独立的精神我们就不可能获得成功的喜悦。
第三段的写作:(超级无敌高尚结束段)
The picture, to some degree, makes us reflect the conventional success and enlightens us to wonder the
meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values. The spirit of independence is widely acknowledged as the
essential trait that will entitle us not only the material wealth or rank of power but also the way to make life
meaningful. So, the surest way to have a meaningful, happy life is to set goals mattering to us and to the world and
commit ourselves to striving for it with this quality.
从某种程度上讲，这幅图画使我们去反思传统的成功，启发我们去探究生命的意义和那些永恒的精神
价值。独立的精神是一种必须的品质，能使我们不仅可以获得物质财富和权力，还能让我们找到使生命更
有意义的道路。所以获得幸福和充满意义的生活的最可靠的方式就是找到对白己和对这个世界都重要的目
标，在这种精神的伴随下，白己不断地努力。
版本二:
To a large extent, we are compelled by this drawing to reflect on the conventional successes that take up an
inappropriately large share of our energy and time. It inspires us to explore the real essence of life and to derive
guidance from the ever-lasting moral values that truly matter.
This drawing, in a way, enlightens us on the limits of old beliefs of success, which carries much less value
than the immortal values that in deed carries weight to a man's life.
从某种程度上讲，这幅图画使我们去反思传统的成功，启发我们去探究生命的意义和那些永恒的精神
价值。
版本三:
…第一句:…
任何能真正获得幸福的人都必须具有这种精神，这种精神不仅能产生物质财富和一般意义的成功，而
且能让我们获得真正的有意义的人生。
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…第二句:…
所以我们必须记住:获得幸福和充满意义的生活的最可靠之路，开始于找到一个对白己和对这个世界都
重要的目标，我们不断努力，我们就能最终到达幸福的终点站。
16. So, doubtless, what should be borne in our mind's is that the most reliable path
to gain access meaningful and contented life begins with setting goals mattering
both to ourselves and others，and runs ahead finally to the terminal of happiness
with our continuous devotion.
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