范文:Going to Work on Bicycle Rather than by Bus
「要求」
现代人出行有多种交通工具可以选择，公共汽车和自行车就是两个最普遍的工具。有人认为坐公共汽车上班最方便，而有人则认为骑自行车更好。你的意见如何？请写一篇短文表明你的意见和理由。
「范文」
Going to Work on Bicycle Rather than by Bus
In my opinion， bicycles， as a means of transportation， have many advantages over buses.
One reason is the traffic jam. Crowded people and numerous vehicles often hold up the traffic. You can hardly afford the delay.
Another reason is the difficulty in getting on a bus during rush hours. There are so many people waiting at the bus stop. You will be quite lucky if you can push your way into the bus.
What happens in the bus is the third reason. Pressed by the crowded passengers， you feel very uncomfortable. A passenger standing next to you may shove his elbow in you ribs or step on your toes. It is certainly a relief when you finally get off the bus.
By comparison， riding on bicycle can free you from all these troubles. It is seldom stopped by the traffic jam， thus making you active at your workplace in time. Also， it limbers up your muscles and animates your mind.
「评语」
本文一开始就开门见山地指明骑自行车上班更有利。接着文章分别阐明了几个原因：第一，交通阻塞，乘车容易误事；第二，乘车困难；第三，上车后拥挤不堪；第四，骑自行车上班的好处。写这类文章最忌拐弯抹角，顾左右而言他。本文的一大优点就是单刀直入，论据清楚，语言平易懂。
用细节来讲道理，理直气壮，说服力更强。
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